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Crazy Haiku Thread!

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  • This topic has 306 replies, 18 voices, and was last updated 15 years, 11 months ago by Annastefka.
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  • February 8, 2004 at 2:34 pm #95053
    fata morgana
    Participant

      Cela semble plaire
      À Robert, les petits mots
      Du dictionaire

      February 10, 2004 at 11:21 am #95054
      fata morgana
      Participant

        Sauter sur les mots
        Après l’Apéro–j’ai soif
        Sucrés biscottis!

        February 11, 2004 at 6:53 am #95055
        likeaghost
        Participant

          sex workers art show
          awake but thought not to go
          must read the wrong ads

          February 12, 2004 at 5:19 pm #95056
          fata morgana
          Participant

            A peel to appeal
            Petit string bean bikini
            Tout vert et jaune

            February 12, 2004 at 5:26 pm #95057
            fata morgana
            Participant

              next

              February 12, 2004 at 5:27 pm #95058
              fata morgana
              Participant

                Robert se taît, il
                boude l’assiette, cherche
                Des mots dans ses plats

                February 12, 2004 at 6:03 pm #95059
                fata morgana
                Participant

                  Robert, ne sait plus
                  Quoi faire, il espère que le
                  Son de la langue

                  Se digère comme une
                  Plante commestible qui se perd
                  Dans l’intestin grèle

                  February 16, 2004 at 9:32 am #95060
                  likeaghost
                  Participant

                    i had a crazy haiku thread kind of night at work so here are it’s results, as such, but the words are in my notebook, this thread, whoever started it, i could look, i think it was MattMan or Halfman, it’s so confusing, but i am afraid to move the mouse as it is on the same object as my notbook, mini as such, pocket to say, coma boy today, but buabbaling in fear that my notbook set perfectly to mark the four pages holding the circa being there are four on page one that i’m starring at but who knows how many i fit on the other pages, being 5 7 5 it should be same, but i know i used a page with other hiaku on it, but anyway, no mouse movement while the notebook is on the bongo drum makeshift mouse pad island, which isn’t very sturdy, it had previously been a coffee table, but that was even crazier, drum radius being the approxiamate legnth of my uni-ball micro pens, but they are the book markers sotosay, back to the hiakus, in chronolgial order, yet backwards by position in my notebook which never goes according to time or rather date, but enough maddness…

                    adding now seems write
                    always moment specific
                    life seems to be now

                    cherry cola here
                    want coffee but over there
                    wet floor soon to dry

                    bonus conentary; i just edited "seperates" to "soon to dry", in hopes to express my reason for not getting a fresh cup of coffee to replace my cherry cola which was actually a late replacement for my normal sprite fix after coffee tastes too much around 3 am or so, but i was scared to edit it in nmy notebook as my markers were pens and the top weight was my cell phone, only phone actually, but i pulled out a pen marking the final page of poems and replaced it, leaving cap to mark place while editing, with only the phone falling to the carpeteed floor which wasn’t as bad as the fall it took last weekend, again another story, another time, i can’t believe i have a phone, i wanted to be like a ghost, now i’m a citizen, about to pay taxes even soon, maybe i should change my name, back at the chicken shack…

                    two loves lost so far
                    twice gave in but never win
                    want lemonheads back

                    question sense or cents
                    how did scents get forgotten
                    i like quality

                    pressure refresher
                    close but no cigar so far
                    apart from love, smiles

                    lonely but happy
                    rockin’ out oh so sappy
                    where is that darn page

                    need to read the news
                    words easily number one
                    rest is just for fun

                    hip hop half price shop
                    vinyl in bins, books like sins
                    making out real cheap

                    dub a you dee fore
                    tee left out, syllable count
                    issues? need tissue

                    reciever saver
                    more than a fan become eye
                    if fixes walkman

                    minor coffee spill
                    most cleaned up, new cup to fill
                    be more careful, now

                    do you like music?
                    best part of the night before
                    holidaze lost maze

                    second edit, easy since last page, second to last unit, second line first syllable, rather word, but i actually took the time to look up syllable in my favorite dictionary, the first word was actually "be", not "best", i remember gietting a costomer during this verse and that might have played in the slip up, but i think i rushed though it before i went to the regestier, probably heard the bell after be then looked at the moniter,, finished quick and got to work, but anyway these hiakus represent work done one night at work about mostly that night and the previous night being valentines day which was fun. I wore black to be morbid and felt funny for doing it knowingly and even telling that to a girl, good times, oh the last poem is only one line right now but i’ll try to finish it as reporting

                    water don’t bother
                    time to sleep not much longer
                    wake early day now

                    good night, day, morning, evening, time

                    February 16, 2004 at 9:46 am #95061
                    likeaghost
                    Participant

                      man, oh man, just found another page from last night…

                      sorry for the insanity

                      i miss my sprite fix
                      wish i was cool and got chicks
                      fall asleep at feet

                      Thelonious Monk
                      get me through this dull work day
                      favorite box set

                      god on my shoulder
                      mind lost or refund full cost
                      hopes never on ropes

                      turned it up so loud
                      can hear it in my sad soul
                      round midnight solo

                      this page occured somewhere in the middle, early though being i listened to my three disc columbia years Thelonious Monk box set first half of my shift and it is referenced quite a bit here.

                      out again

                      likeaghost

                      February 18, 2004 at 12:28 pm #95062
                      fata morgana
                      Participant

                        Como uno árbol
                        Que corta son raíz
                        En el desierto

                        February 19, 2004 at 8:35 am #95063
                        likeaghost
                        Participant

                          in other lang’gwij
                          no way i could pull that off
                          fun phonetically

                          February 21, 2004 at 3:57 pm #95064
                          *sophie*
                          Participant

                            robert aimerait
                            comprendre tous les mots chauds
                            des bouches francaises

                            February 21, 2004 at 4:32 pm #95065
                            Robert
                            Participant

                              I really have to learn how to become immune to french!
                              I’m sure you’re making fun of me in the most spectacular way, but I’m still hooked :mrgreen:

                              February 21, 2004 at 4:34 pm #95066
                              *sophie*
                              Participant

                                i was not, baby !
                                it was just about the fact
                                you need to learn french :P

                                February 21, 2004 at 4:44 pm #95067
                                Robert
                                Participant

                                  You are so true! I’m just a bit worried that’ll take away some of the magic :D

                                  Sophie er sjarmerende
                                  hun får en robert til
                                  å smile og le.

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