lyrics that need a title….

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  • January 31, 2002 at 2:19 am #44869
    Randy Jane
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      Hello, I have lyrics, but need a title. Yes, I know this song is very odd to say the least, but its also (to me) a very serious song, or at least a very serious matter, but either way, here are the lyrics.

      I feel compelled to draw my name,
      I almost felt the nine month pain.
      I must’ve failed to show you good,
      Why I die, to prove that?

      Ah
      Ah

      What in your life,
      Would you lie for?
      What in your life,
      Would you give for?
      What in your life,
      Would you die for?

      Cant stand for lack of legs,
      Cant fertilize for lack of eggs.
      Guess tonight you’ll make me feel,
      Keep me warm, the same old deal.

      Ah
      Ah

      What in your life,
      Would you lie for?
      What in your life,
      Would you give for?
      What in your life,
      Would you die for?

      I’ll die young (repeated)

      Its a slow slong, I could almost see SY doing something like this. In the chorus, I have to hold a moderatley high note for like 20 seconds or so, and everytime I get to that part of the chorus I almost pass out. OK, youve read, I have a demo of it if anyone wants to hear it before it goes on an album, let me know and we can work something out.

      RJ.

      January 31, 2002 at 2:21 am #67730
      Randy Jane
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        sorry….Why MUST I die to prove that?

        I missed that typo, sorry, sorry everyone, sorry.

        RJ.

        January 31, 2002 at 3:40 pm #67731
        AGAP
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          Hey RJ,

          What Would is my choice

          Allison

          January 31, 2002 at 3:52 pm #67732
          Cloud9
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            Hey RJ

            I would go for "Untitled"

            Santa Claus is weird [img]http://www.3dpcgame.com/cwm/s/cwm/alien/alien.gif[/img]

            January 31, 2002 at 4:00 pm #67733
            malcom
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              Dinosaur Jr. would probably call it "Would I?" or "Searching"

              Nirvana says you should call it "Novacain Soul" or "Purgatory"

              The Flaming Lips would call it "The Ejected Fetus That Journies to the Edge ot the Universe and Saw That it Was Good <img>

              February 1, 2002 at 2:46 am #67734
              Mattman
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                ‘The Mudbound Elephant Travels South’

                or..

                ‘Fine Flying Fingernails’

                Wait, does the name have to relate to the lyrics? <img> <img>

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                February 1, 2002 at 5:38 am #67735
                Randy Jane
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                  Well, I liked What Would, and Searching……maybe one of those two. I also thought that the fetus thing was great too…..hehehe. I do have one song called Buffering, I dont know if Im going to record that one or not, but its a pretty cool song.

                  February 1, 2002 at 10:54 am #67736
                  Long Distance Drunk
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                    When in doubt, go with something from the first line, maybe "Draw My Name"? Just a thought…

                    February 1, 2002 at 7:17 pm #67737
                    ScreamingTree
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                      What image comes to your mind as you hear it? Name it that. Songs with really obvious titles are boring I think….my 2 cents..

                      February 1, 2002 at 8:01 pm #67738
                      Hansione
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                        I would go for: "Ah". It is short, it is catchy and it doesn’t give much away of the meaning of the song.
                        Nice lyrics BTW

                        February 1, 2002 at 8:27 pm #67739
                        AGAP
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                          Hey RJ,

                          Forgot to say very cool lyrics, would love to hear a demo of that!!!

                          Screaming Tree your not saying Freakscene etc are boring song titles are you <img> <img> <img>

                          I like The Flaming Lips style title… <img>

                          Allison

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