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  • January 13, 2002 at 6:25 pm #45217
    Halfman
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      Space for rent.

      January 16, 2002 at 11:19 pm #72632
      rosa
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        thank you for coming back to me
        you Responded even if you didn’t SVP
        cherished words like fresh fruit
        seep into the cracks of this distant city

        January 18, 2002 at 2:45 am #72633
        Halfman
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          Vacant.

          January 18, 2002 at 3:45 pm #72634
          passion
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            …waiting for the second Tom! [img]images/smiles/icon_wink.gif[/img]

            January 18, 2002 at 10:37 pm #72635
            Bucky Ramone
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              </font><blockquote><font>quote:</font><hr><font>Originally posted by deepsludge:
              <strong>I remember Bernard Goetz. He’s the vigilante citizen who shot some thugs, right? </strong></font><hr></blockquote><font>

              Well, that might not be the whole truth,

              read this…..

              January 21, 2002 at 3:46 am #72636
              Halfman
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                Void.

                January 21, 2002 at 6:01 pm #72637
                passion
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                  hey thats great! Hope i could translate mine…
                  lets try…

                  i travel without memory
                  without eyes
                  without light
                  your hands like braids round my breath
                  seas the paintings without frames and signatures
                  boats the moments in the movement of shine
                  the rain whispers with the moonlight
                  humidity surounds my existence
                  and you somewhere near protecting me

                  i travel without borders
                  without plans
                  without whys
                  small fairys sculpt the wave
                  talking to the ships that go away
                  the rain whips the leaves of the trees
                  the yellow seemes deeper
                  the green more blue
                  thunders tear in two my doupt
                  lightings bewitch my ears
                  you are here and nowhere

                  i travel in the lights like a movie like a fire
                  my eyes become hazy
                  everything is being followed by little colourful tailes
                  we are slipping greedy on the black tongue
                  going somewhere
                  you are beside me

                  i travel with you
                  to the full seconds
                  to the true fantasy
                  i hear nothing silence breaks the barrier of secure
                  but i feel strings screaming on my body
                  eyes that drill my brain
                  breathes that affirms
                  we live together…

                  January 26, 2002 at 6:09 pm #72638
                  Halfman
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                    Gap.

                    January 27, 2002 at 2:11 am #72639
                    passion
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                      …hey i know that translation killed the poem at least two times…but …i tried…not a word ha? <img>

                      January 27, 2002 at 5:11 pm #72640
                      passion
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                        …i believe that writting is a way of expression…i dont call myself a poet <img> …noone can criticize …unless he is an expert…we can just have an opinion though!
                        …dont take it personaly Half man(because of the fact that you also write or started the topic)…it was just a joke <img> …i was laughing when i was trying…to translate it! <img>

                        February 8, 2002 at 2:39 am #72641
                        Halfman
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                          An Exit.

                          February 8, 2002 at 4:00 am #72642
                          rosa
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                            you look twice as good when we’re not together
                            twice as hot in colder weather
                            bigger eyes in a smaller room
                            maybe things ended a little too soon

                            <small>[ 02-08-2002, 02:02 AM: Message edited by: rosa ]</small>

                            February 8, 2002 at 4:03 am #72643
                            rosa
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                              By the way, I laid down some crazy personal poetry earlier, and when I posted it, the bbs left-aligned the whole goddamn text. Any way to change that, or is the universe just trying to send me a message that my lyrical prowess is not prowly enough?

                              thanks
                              Rosa

                              February 8, 2002 at 7:54 pm #72644
                              Halfman
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                                I have learrned, here , that one need not go to too many extremes in the extension of friendship, lest misinterpretation and disinterest arise.

                                February 15, 2002 at 10:20 pm #72645
                                Halfman
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                                  Absence makes the heart grow fond.
                                  Never shall we part.

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