poetry thread

[Halfman]

Space for rent.

[rosa]

thank you for coming back to me
you Responded even if you didn’t SVP
cherished words like fresh fruit
seep into the cracks of this distant city

[Halfman]

Vacant.

[passion]

…waiting for the second Tom! [img]images/smiles/icon_wink.gif[/img]

[Bucky Ramone]

</font><blockquote><font>quote:</font><hr><font>Originally posted by deepsludge:
<strong>I remember Bernard Goetz. He’s the vigilante citizen who shot some thugs, right? </strong></font><hr></blockquote><font>

Well, that might not be the whole truth,

read this…..

[Halfman]

Void.

[passion]

hey thats great! Hope i could translate mine…
lets try…

i travel without memory
without eyes
without light
your hands like braids round my breath
seas the paintings without frames and signatures
boats the moments in the movement of shine
the rain whispers with the moonlight
humidity surounds my existence
and you somewhere near protecting me

i travel without borders
without plans
without whys
small fairys sculpt the wave
talking to the ships that go away
the rain whips the leaves of the trees
the yellow seemes deeper
the green more blue
thunders tear in two my doupt
lightings bewitch my ears
you are here and nowhere

i travel in the lights like a movie like a fire
my eyes become hazy
everything is being followed by little colourful tailes
we are slipping greedy on the black tongue
going somewhere
you are beside me

i travel with you
to the full seconds
to the true fantasy
i hear nothing silence breaks the barrier of secure
but i feel strings screaming on my body
eyes that drill my brain
breathes that affirms
we live together…

[Halfman]

Gap.

[passion]

…hey i know that translation killed the poem at least two times…but …i tried…not a word ha? <img>

[passion]

…i believe that writting is a way of expression…i dont call myself a poet <img> …noone can criticize …unless he is an expert…we can just have an opinion though!
…dont take it personaly Half man(because of the fact that you also write or started the topic)…it was just a joke <img> …i was laughing when i was trying…to translate it! <img>

[Halfman]

An Exit.

[rosa]

you look twice as good when we’re not together
twice as hot in colder weather
bigger eyes in a smaller room
maybe things ended a little too soon

<small>[ 02-08-2002, 02:02 AM: Message edited by: rosa ]</small>

[rosa]

By the way, I laid down some crazy personal poetry earlier, and when I posted it, the bbs left-aligned the whole goddamn text. Any way to change that, or is the universe just trying to send me a message that my lyrical prowess is not prowly enough?

thanks
Rosa

[Halfman]

I have learrned, here , that one need not go to too many extremes in the extension of friendship, lest misinterpretation and disinterest arise.

[Halfman]

Absence makes the heart grow fond.
Never shall we part.

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