poetry thread

[likeaghost]

waste no space
ripped from sheets
close we meet
eyes thighs lies
shirt no ties

squirt won’t hurt
two will due
fixed four fun
pursiut pounced
team dreams reborn

[likeaghost]

rain walk home vein
frenz inherited seemed sain
never trust away potenpain
ends shows tee lain

focus i’m red in the face
sight better but pleasure seldom treasure
clarity arose as pens bled stiff

most think treason
some pathetic proser
posture plus passion
no sense of fashion

four aces
stoned faces

[fata morgana]

Here’s one against further developement in the Laurentiens valley, where that hideous Mont-Tremblant–Disneyland of the North–lays… If they decide to wreck the land further, and apparently they plan to, they will be met by… the likes of someone like me. Here’s a little poem for the potential developers:

This is why:
Trees can’t leave
Rivers can’t run
Mountains can’t move
And why most creatures
And humans
Have lost
What is left
Of their homes

[13lungz]

"Ayo, now dat I got your undivided attention/
I can start on this ball bustin’ session/
Rip you from limb to limb untill you fall into depression/
Make you wanna hang ya self/
Runnin’ at you harder than G-Unit n’ D12/
Holdin’ a big blade at ya throat, screamin’ for help/
If you reply to me/
Open your eyes, and maybe you’ll see/
You ain’t nuttin’ but a two cent bitch/
Come battle me/
I know for a fact your skirred and hidin’/
Your cryin’ to mommy, while Im blazin’ n’ ridin’/
I’ll take ya girl home, givin’ me bomb dome/
Sippin’ on Priviliged Henny and gettin’ zoned/
How much bullshit can I take on my own/
Freak scene is the place to be/
Get mudered by rhymes, and lines for FREE!/

[likeaghost]

[likeaghost]

cooler couldn’t be fooler
before u c me out the door
bore snore lure
voltron or beowulf
crisis or campfire
never will i retire
sleep to keep
words i reep
creepin’ like Jan
never know plan
B a letter
lost my sueter
found behind chair
hope you care

[likeaghost]

amy from zen el o p
best thing cops ever brought me
company smiles even a wink
coffee soda but water she’d drink
think about chances
wish more dances
alone near phone
close like a ghost

only but still
be bring glee
flee to soon
me a loon
need to kiss
soft feelings loft

thoughts knots doled out
shout bout boxing sins
ring no king to be
as razz roast toast

cheers

[likeaghost]

don’t tell me to stop
your idle words
won’t be well heardz
tellin’ me to cease
would only increase
the in take
will not break
have it
rab id

trapped
but smiling
whiling out
tout not taught
troubles caught
relief bought
urges fought
break alot

if you will
say untill
i’d still
fix ill
with thrill
that kill
not bill
he gone
sad song

coffee cold
words bold
never sold
out haute
joke giggle
bye middle
play fiddle
phat little
no aquital

[likeaghost]

heart racing
sole chasing
straight know
cheeze whiz
with out
show biz
mar key
ball part
show me
glowing like the prize winning dog
fog for another word wouldn’t get going
gone
so
long

making mistakes fashionable
wearing out to force feed read
deed good if only new could
should be simple press in dimple

away thy truths
sorry
hear my comedy
once again
par
none
zero
hero

[13lungz]

Ayo, I sit and I wait /
So damn long fo da medicine I gotta take/
Fallin’ all ova in da hallway and lobby/
Junkies wait fo their name to be called/
Some of them on the floor wrapped up and curled in a ball/
Gettin’ butterflies in ya stomach when its your turn/
Hot flashes and cold sweats, Im on fire ready to burn/
Maybe someday I’ll wake up and finnally learn/
It ain’ about feelin’ great all da time/
Its about havin’ %100 total control ova ya mind/
But fo now Im gonna do what I do and bust these lines!/

"We playin’ chess you playin checkers…… about to get ya ass jumped" – Slim Shady

[stephe]

"13lungz" wrote:

Ayo, I sit and I wait /
So damn long fo da medicine I gotta take/
Fallin’ all ova in da hallway and lobby/
Junkies wait fo their name to be called/
Some of them on the floor wrapped up and curled in a ball/
Gettin’ butterflies in ya stomach when its your turn/
Hot flashes and cold sweats, Im on fire ready to burn/
Maybe someday I’ll wake up and finnally learn/
It ain’ about feelin’ great all da time/
Its about havin’ %100 total control ova ya mind/
But fo now Im gonna do what I do and bust these lines!/

"We playin’ chess you playin checkers…… about to get ya ass jumped" – Slim Shady

Excuse me eminem but you haven’t you posted this somewhere else already? Wouldn’t it be easier to post a link instead of typing out the same weak rhymes twice?

[13lungz]

Ayo, 13lungz is here to battle any haters up in dis piece/
And fo real all the Eminem bullshit should cease/
Go ahead and compare me to the illest emcee/
All you haters know this forum is dull wit out me/
Who the hell are you to tell me WHERE to write???/
You ain’t shit but a two cent bitch and i’ll fuck ya grandma outta spite/
U and LikeAGhost are little girls who like to start cat fights/
So do you want me to stop and put up da white flag/
Fuck dat you just fueled my fire, go home and watch Jag/
Little ho, your fake like a tall tail/
It’s insane how you can get beat up like a chump threw an email/
Screen name immitator…edit
Famliy’s so poor they tryin’ to hustle ketchup packets/
Now I got the upperhand in dis game/
Man your so lame/
You got mo than 1 screen name/
What’s da matter, why you tryin’ to hide/
U afraid to die????…./
U like how you say you from Detroit/
Hide behind screen names like a coward, while I get straight to da point/
Can’t believe you think Im gonna get bullied/
Fo real HOMO I don’t think you understand fully/
Slice you wit a scalpel like a surgeon/
I’ll tell you right now Im always the last one to get da word in!/

(STEPHE)….. or whoever the fuck yous is….

reply wit a different screen name chump………

[AGAP]

hmmm, this is a place to post poetry, constructive criticism & respectful disagreements on content etc are appreciated. Name calling & abusive behavior on either side is not cool with us at all

We don’t have a problem with the posts to a couple threads, so… :aliensmile:

[likeaghost]

hurt not eye
question only why
if talent be true
why hate in you
bring peace
pack piece
pawn sown
over blown
green mean
lines lean

[fata morgana]

"13lungz" wrote:

Ayo, 13lungz is here to battle any haters up in dis piece/
And fo real all the Eminem bullshit should cease/
Go ahead and compare me to the illest emcee/
All you haters know this forum is dull wit out me/
Who the hell are you to tell me WHERE to write???/
You ain’t shit but a two cent bitch and i’ll fuck ya grandma outta spite/
U and LikeAGhost are little girls who like to start cat fights/
So do you want me to stop and put up da white flag/
Fuck dat you just fueled my fire, go home and watch Jag/
Little ho, your fake like a tall tail/
It’s insane how you can get beat up like a chump threw an email/
Screen name immitator…edit
Famliy’s so poor they tryin’ to hustle ketchup packets/
Now I got the upperhand in dis game/
Man your so lame/
You got mo than 1 screen name/
What’s da matter, why you tryin’ to hide/
U afraid to die????…./
U like how you say you from Detroit/
Hide behind screen names like a coward, while I get straight to da point/
Can’t believe you think Im gonna get bullied/
Fo real HOMO I don’t think you understand fully/
Slice you wit a scalpel like a surgeon/
I’ll tell you right now Im always the last one to get da word in!/

(STEPHE)….. or whoever the fuck yous is….

reply wit a different screen name chump………

Hey 13lungs
Why you quiver?
I like yo second lines better–
Hey, Bling, Bling
Don’ need to bust yer chops
Forsometwocentbitchesrocks
Gotssome iron, gotssome lungz
Gotssome Freestylin’ in with Da Freaks
That be good, ’cause they ain’t no creeps…

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