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poetry thread

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  • This topic has 500 replies, 34 voices, and was last updated 11 years, 1 month ago by kerbdogma.
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  • February 16, 2002 at 3:29 am #72646
    rosa
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      You know, posting in this thread feels like organ donation. But I’ll trust that there aren’t pirates out there, surfing dino jr sites and infringing on my property.

      February 17, 2002 at 5:28 pm #72647
      Halfman
      Participant

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        February 21, 2002 at 11:22 pm #72648
        rosa
        Participant

          fruit flies circling
          ides of March unruly
          betrayed September’s tepid glances
          oh please tell me,
          > what were my chances
          astral projection
          astral rejection
          flame thrower in the night
          but he’s afraid of heights
          residual shares, residual cares
          payback’s a bitch
          flip that dirty switch

          February 22, 2002 at 1:59 am #72649
          Halfman
          Participant

            S and L: "You said Lucky Strike by three lengths?" 15%

            February 22, 2002 at 2:10 am #72650
            Halfman
            Participant

              Again, I want to take time to thank everyone who has posted to this thread. I also want to thank the constabulary that allows myself and others to express themselves in such ways as we do here, a most unlikely place for such offerings.

              . Courtesy of the vast tastes, ideas and experiences each person owns and is willing to share at FS, I feel as though I have grown after a fashion. Whether someone chooses to focus on what is held in esteem or admiration versus the sodden weightlessness of contention or self-interest is not essential.

              The most important event is that we had the opportunity to be introduced. The most grating or silent person encountered owns the chance of being a teacher. Recognition and hospitality are shown in ways that often derive from the viewer’s frame of reference, with little consideration for the background or history of the imagemaker.

              Further, who can hope to feel or think in the same fashion as someone whose only ability to express themselves is carried forth in the form of electronic correspondence? After all, you exercise the sense of touch, when a finger touches a key or mouse button, correct? Is it possible to use this method for allowing a person unknown miles away to feel anything the sender intends? Perhaps, the sense of sight allows a clearer understanding of what touch can make available, provided a venue or vehicle is used.

              Luckily, we of the modern, electronic age can physically do with ease what writers, composers, musicians and artists stuggled with for centuries: deliver a message of thought and feeling by physical means. Is this to say the other methods are less valid or useful today? I still have a dandy of a time getting a person to believe how someone can run up and down on a plane without resorting to time-honored methods. Can the rain really whisper on its own? How can a person look "hot" without a way to make sense of such language?
              My pen alone, or a keyboard, or a thought, or a feeling, each and of its own accord only take part in both a message’s delivery and interpretation. The combining of such elements, along with the artisian’s intended and possible reactions, play major roles in communicating.

              Finally, an often neglected role in the chain is that of a responsible auidience. Is the patron happy to make a purchase? Will the …"landlord become the next tenant’s guest" as John Dryden so provocatively put it? Acknowledging the worth of nothing more than the artist’s time and efforts of sharing a minute piece of themselves is preferred to the mishandling of critiques whose values are determined by convenience, instinct, or blindness.

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              February 24, 2002 at 4:50 am #72651
              Halfman
              Participant

                This poem is an excerpt from the forthcoming book "A Beer on Every Page" by Exene Cervenka.

                Month Any 1983

                Ritually speaking I’d rather be sailing.
                No. I’d rather listen to Pierce’s piercing
                voice with no one to speak to alone in my motel
                room stuck with two broken cigarettes. Listening
                to them build a new house that’s already been.

                A man and his immature female sidekick order
                what appears to be ugly duckling, with a side
                order of ugly dumplings. The waitress drops a dish on the floor ducking from an imaginary nazi.
                There goes the kreplatach. Oh oh. Spaghetti O’s
                We went bowling and I found a ball that had
                "Boris" etched into it. It was too heavy but I
                used it anyway.

                February 24, 2002 at 8:48 pm #72652
                fata morgana
                Participant

                  Poetry 4

                  This one’s for you
                  Koo,koo kea,schew
                  Cop^aplea for Timbuktu
                  Brave-a-baby
                  Horse or two
                  Oasis of tea and poppy

                  February 27, 2002 at 10:36 pm #72653
                  JimmydaFuzz
                  Participant

                    You may or may not have read this one (answers on a postcard etc if you know where its from)
                    I’ll post something of my own later in the week….

                    There was a young man from Japan…

                    Just Kidding <img>

                    It’s a Raymond Chandler evening
                    At the end of someone’s day
                    I’m standing in my pocket
                    And I’m slowly turning grey

                    I remember what I told you
                    But I can’t remember why
                    And the yellow leaves are falling
                    In a spiral from the sky

                    There’s a body on the railings
                    That I can’t identify
                    And I’d like to reassure you
                    But I’m not that kind of guy

                    It’s a Raymond Chandler evening
                    And the pavements are all wet
                    And I’m waiting in the shadows
                    Because it hasn’t happened…

                    …yet.

                    And here’s one from our friend Mr. Waits…

                    The Ocean doesn’t want me today
                    But I’ll be back tomorrow to play
                    And the strangles will take me
                    Down deep in their brine
                    The mischievous braingels
                    Down into the endless blue wine
                    I’ll open my head and let out
                    All of my time
                    I’d love to go drowning
                    And to stay and to stay
                    But the ocean doesn’t want me today
                    I’ll go in up to here
                    It can’t possibly hurt
                    All they will find is my beer
                    and my shirt
                    A rip tide is raging
                    And the life guard is away
                    But the ocean…
                    The Ocean doesn’t want me today

                    February 28, 2002 at 4:04 pm #72654
                    passion
                    Participant

                      Here is an older one

                      Love was like a rain drop in my heart;
                      the dull snow bled;
                      a drop that watered the aged lips of inertia;

                      Falling on the empty glass of lonelyness;
                      filling with sounds of pleasure
                      the spring of the year;
                      The sunrise bloomed; the mist forgot its sorrow…

                      The petals are sad;the expression melancholys;
                      The palms of the innocent are full of needle pricks;
                      The face of the simple is graven;

                      Inside the box hand in hand with despair
                      the silky fibre of lust
                      bables with her breath;

                      It was death the liquid that watered her
                      the transformed temtation;
                      It was the arrow that bled her heart;
                      which deprived her of the drop of eternal reign…

                      March 6, 2002 at 4:16 am #72655
                      Halfman
                      Participant

                        Rolling, Tumbling, Tinkering…Tinkling

                        March 18, 2002 at 4:02 am #72656
                        Halfman
                        Participant

                          Chasm.

                          March 26, 2002 at 12:27 am #72657
                          Halfman
                          Participant

                            Applications for poems of approved high culture accepted here. 😀

                            March 28, 2002 at 6:34 pm #72658
                            Cloud9
                            Participant

                              Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp
                              Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp
                              Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp
                              Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp
                              Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp
                              Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp


                              I really like this beautiful Poem
                              Simple but Beautiful
                              I had this Poem on an album
                              But that Album disappeared somewhere
                              Hope to find it some day again

                              I hope u enjoyed my 1st contributing to this Art Forum

                              Confused but happy, I think

                              Zea in Heaven

                              March 28, 2002 at 9:27 pm #72659
                              Bucky Ramone
                              Participant

                                </font><blockquote><font>quote:</font><table><tr><td><table><tr><td>Originally posted by The Risen Lord:
                                <strong>Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp
                                Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp
                                Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp
                                Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp
                                Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp
                                Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp Tjielp


                                I really like this beautiful Poem
                                Simple but Beautiful
                                I had this Poem on an album
                                But that Album disappeared somewhere
                                Hope to find it some day again
                                </strong></td></tr></table></td></tr></table></blockquote>It’s a poem by dutch poet Jan Hanlo, someone called Tom America released an album called ‘Tjielp tjielp’, full of Hanlo’s poems put to music, it’s a fine album, I think it’s the one you’re looking for…

                                March 28, 2002 at 11:12 pm #72660
                                Halfman
                                Participant

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