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Here is an older one
Love was like a rain drop in my heart;
the dull snow bled;
a drop that watered the aged lips of inertia;Falling on the empty glass of lonelyness;
filling with sounds of pleasure
the spring of the year;
The sunrise bloomed; the mist forgot its sorrow…The petals are sad;the expression melancholys;
The palms of the innocent are full of needle pricks;
The face of the simple is graven;Inside the box hand in hand with despair
the silky fibre of lust
bables with her breath;It was death the liquid that watered her
the transformed temtation;
It was the arrow that bled her heart;
which deprived her of the drop of eternal reign…yeah i agree with you! Thats a really great band! I feel glad i saw them…lets hope that other bands – good like that – are gonna come! I suppose that i have to wait till summer for the rock wave festival!(its a three day festival with cool names!)
hey Salamiguy thanks for replying…how can i start? …they were great! No words can describe the situation!…one of the most wonderful lives i have ever been!
hey i hope its true! They are a great band! <img>
cool site Spaceboy! Thanks! <img>
…Allison that s a great idea! Whoever he (she) is…gonna love it! <img>
…i believe that writting is a way of expression…i dont call myself a poet <img> …noone can criticize …unless he is an expert…we can just have an opinion though!
…dont take it personaly Half man(because of the fact that you also write or started the topic)…it was just a joke <img> …i was laughing when i was trying…to translate it! <img>…great pic Jeremiah…sure its diffirent to put a face to a name! <img>
…cool pics Simmons! Thanks! <img>
…hey Allison thanks! I had bought the book for myself as a present for christmas! It s great! <img>
…hey i know that translation killed the poem at least two times…but …i tried…not a word ha? <img>
if i ask you will you answer? if yes start with this <img>
hey thats great! Hope i could translate mine…
lets try…i travel without memory
without eyes
without light
your hands like braids round my breath
seas the paintings without frames and signatures
boats the moments in the movement of shine
the rain whispers with the moonlight
humidity surounds my existence
and you somewhere near protecting mei travel without borders
without plans
without whys
small fairys sculpt the wave
talking to the ships that go away
the rain whips the leaves of the trees
the yellow seemes deeper
the green more blue
thunders tear in two my doupt
lightings bewitch my ears
you are here and nowherei travel in the lights like a movie like a fire
my eyes become hazy
everything is being followed by little colourful tailes
we are slipping greedy on the black tongue
going somewhere
you are beside mei travel with you
to the full seconds
to the true fantasy
i hear nothing silence breaks the barrier of secure
but i feel strings screaming on my body
eyes that drill my brain
breathes that affirms
we live together……waiting for the second Tom! [img]images/smiles/icon_wink.gif[/img]
…hi Randy Jane!…it would be cool to hear your song about your friend… [img]images/smiles/icon_smile.gif[/img]
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